Well not what I would of choses but they are interesting such as the "Be a leader, not a follower." that one I really like. the other 2 such as the Dream.jpg I really didn't like, the way it was done could've been improved a little such as the colors. and finally the last one "Defense wins ball games" lol, I like that because...well its true. B.T.W I'm a leader not a follower.
i like the quotes. especially the first one. for me, it's really bright. but thats okay, because that just draws a person's attention to them. the "I have a dream" one is really busy, but i like it.
-The diagonal lines were a strong contribution to the poster because of the words "leader" and "follower". -The lines may have been more powerful/eye drawing if they were lined up. The sizing is fine, but they are off in their placement.
"I have a dream" -The repetition of the word "dream" in the background was very creative and helpful in drawing attention to the message of the quote
-the background could be improved by instead of everything being symmetric and lined up, to have the word "dream" starting in different places on each line in order to draw even more attention
"Defense wins ball games"
-The rough edges around the words created a positive contrast
-I would recommend less spacing between the words. It's a little hard for my eyes to follow.
be a leader not a follower - i really liked this one cause it is so true to be like that in life, and the design is really cool and interesting i have a dream - i liked the background because it was a simple idea that made it look really cool defense wins ball games - i liked the roughed edges, it added a lot to the contrast between the colors
1st poster: i like how you incorporated the red, white, and blue colors into the poster and how you made the colored the edge of the poster. i think i would have somehow filled in more of the space behind the words and i would have used a different color for the border instead of yellow. 2nd poster: the words behind the main sentence are cool, but it all seems a bit tooo busy for the eye to handle. all of the bright colors and words. i also can't really tell what letters are used at the beginning and end of the main sentence. it's all crunched together at the ends. 3rd poster: i really like the colors and fonts. the only thing i would change is the outlining of the words. none of them really flow with the words. they just sort of blob around them.
Ok, so for the first one: "Be a leader..." I do like the idea (well mostly) and I like the way you used it, but personally I thought it was a bit on the bright side. Then again I just prefer more subtle colors so...Anyway I thought the spacing of the words and the way you organized them was really great. It added a lot of emphasis to the idea of the quote (at least for me.)
For the second one: "I have a dream", the background repetitions of the word dream was (at least for me,) a good link to many ways the quote can be interpreted. I did not really like the coloring on that one, but again that probably has more to do with my dislike of bright colors (especially bright yellow) than anything else, so sorry about that. I also really like how the quote stood out; I thought it had great contrast with the background.
Finally for the last one: "Defense..." I thought the way you isolated each word had a very powerful effect on the quote. I don't know much about sports so, I really don't have any basis to look at that quote from, but still I thought that the idea of the quote seemed good. I liked how it was all just simple (although bright green) in the background, and then right around the words its like "rough edged" (forgive my quote but I thought that was a great way to describe it) white blocks, and also the words are of alternating colors, which makes them stand out even more. Sorry for repeating this so many times, but it really did make it stand out, and I thought the contrast was really good.
i think the first quote is almost the best because of what you did you it, it almost draws you in and you want to look at it same with the other two the colors on the last one where a lot to look at lol so maybe you could put more friendly colors!
i think the first quote is almost the best because of what you did you it, it almost draws you in and you want to look at it same with the other two the colors on the last one where a lot to look at lol so maybe you could put more friendly colors!
the quotes you choose were good and the the first one is very bright and makes you look at it. "i have a dream" i like because of the repetition in the back but it is hard to read the "i have a dream"
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Well not what I would of choses but they are interesting such as the "Be a leader, not a follower." that one I really like.
the other 2 such as the Dream.jpg I really didn't like, the way it was done could've been improved a little such as the colors.
and finally the last one "Defense wins ball games" lol, I like that because...well its true.
B.T.W I'm a leader not a follower.
i like the quotes. especially the first one.
for me, it's really bright. but thats okay, because that just draws a person's attention to them.
the "I have a dream" one is really busy, but i like it.
"Be a leader not a follower"
-The diagonal lines were a strong contribution to the poster because of the words "leader" and "follower".
-The lines may have been more powerful/eye drawing if they were lined up. The sizing is fine, but they are off in their placement.
"I have a dream"
-The repetition of the word "dream" in the background was very creative and helpful in drawing attention to the message of the quote
-the background could be improved by instead of everything being symmetric and lined up, to have the word "dream" starting in different places on each line in order to draw even more attention
"Defense wins ball games"
-The rough edges around the words created a positive contrast
-I would recommend less spacing between the words. It's a little hard for my eyes to follow.
be a leader not a follower - i really liked this one cause it is so true to be like that in life, and the design is really cool and interesting
i have a dream - i liked the background because it was a simple idea that made it look really cool
defense wins ball games - i liked the roughed edges, it added a lot to the contrast between the colors
1st poster:
i like how you incorporated the red, white, and blue colors into the poster and how you made the colored the edge of the poster. i think i would have somehow filled in more of the space behind the words and i would have used a different color for the border instead of yellow.
2nd poster:
the words behind the main sentence are cool, but it all seems a bit tooo busy for the eye to handle. all of the bright colors and words. i also can't really tell what letters are used at the beginning and end of the main sentence. it's all crunched together at the ends.
3rd poster:
i really like the colors and fonts. the only thing i would change is the outlining of the words. none of them really flow with the words. they just sort of blob around them.
Ok, so for the first one: "Be a leader..." I do like the idea (well mostly) and I like the way you used it, but personally I thought it was a bit on the bright side. Then again I just prefer more subtle colors so...Anyway I thought the spacing of the words and the way you organized them was really great. It added a lot of emphasis to the idea of the quote (at least for me.)
For the second one: "I have a dream", the background repetitions of the word dream was (at least for me,) a good link to many ways the quote can be interpreted. I did not really like the coloring on that one, but again that probably has more to do with my dislike of bright colors (especially bright yellow) than anything else, so sorry about that. I also really like how the quote stood out; I thought it had great contrast with the background.
Finally for the last one: "Defense..." I thought the way you isolated each word had a very powerful effect on the quote. I don't know much about sports so, I really don't have any basis to look at that quote from, but still I thought that the idea of the quote seemed good. I liked how it was all just simple (although bright green) in the background, and then right around the words its like "rough edged" (forgive my quote but I thought that was a great way to describe it) white blocks, and also the words are of alternating colors, which makes them stand out even more. Sorry for repeating this so many times, but it really did make it stand out, and I thought the contrast was really good.
i think the first quote is almost the best because of what you did you it, it almost draws you in and you want to look at it same with the other two the colors on the last one where a lot to look at lol so maybe you could put more friendly colors!
i think the first quote is almost the best because of what you did you it, it almost draws you in and you want to look at it same with the other two the colors on the last one where a lot to look at lol so maybe you could put more friendly colors!
the quotes you choose were good and the the first one is very bright and makes you look at it. "i have a dream" i like because of the repetition in the back but it is hard to read the "i have a dream"
1. the yellow was too bright but everything else matched up really well.
2. too busy.
3. doesn't blend together very well....
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